Friday, July 24, 2009

Soulful thoughts in a lonely heart



It’s been a while and I miss you dear,

It’s been a while since I let anyone near.

It’s been so long that I picked a flower,

It’s been so long that I sang during a morning shower.


It looked like dew, for a moment was it you,

It looked so beautiful, but never prettier than you.

In the muddy murky water, I looked for the azure skies,

If it wasn’t to be blue, why cast the blame on me and you.


The stream by the roadside was struggling for a path,

It was lucky to seep through, and I have been trying so hard.

Iam lost looking within, where else would I go,

ahead lies life, that I pretend not to know.


I bowed before the birds, to chirp a little sweeter,

I pleaded with the roses to hold their dew little longer.

I prayed for a serene morning, greener than ever it had to offer,

to help me put to rest this poem, without having to wander any farther.

7 comments:

Priyanka Agrawalla said...

was just visiting ur blog n saw tht u have come with a post!! Only am late :(

As usual, very beautiful Subbu.. Liked these lines especially

"In the muddy murky water, I looked for the azure skies, If it wasn’t to be blue, why cast the blame on me and you."

mystery.s said...

NICE poem..happy to have encountered it while on a random search. :)

Whatever it takes, Write... said...

Thanks for those sweet words...wish you keep up this touch !!!

mystery.s said...

sure :)

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Subu @ Tilak said...

Hi...Its so sweet of you to have followed my poems...What would you like to know more on this..???

confessions of a poetic soul said...

lovely poem :)